Wow, I am surprised at your skills of drafting some wonderful Japanese Haiku Poems. The First poem was so intense, I couldn't take my eyes off the words. It made me wonder if you actually did that before because your words seem so realistic. The second poem was based on observation however it is concise and descriptive. I hope you continue writing some poems during your leisure time because you have a lot of potential in your writing.
Wow, I am surprised at your skills of drafting some wonderful Japanese Haiku Poems. The First poem was so intense, I couldn't take my eyes off the words. It made me wonder if you actually did that before because your words seem so realistic. The second poem was based on observation however it is concise and descriptive. I hope you continue writing some poems during your leisure time because you have a lot of potential in your writing.
回覆刪除